Not A Drop Of Tear

There was no adrinaline rush. No fire was lit in him. He wasnt even feeling anything. Numb he was. Burning inside his mind was the thoughts of all bygone days. Where days were short and nights were lenghty.. When they had loved the dark shades.. He didnt close his eyes the last time they kissed eachother. His hands werent crossed behind her. He didnt try to bring the comforting darkness back.

She wasnt standing on his feet, her hands werent carassing his lenghty hair. She wasnt flying above the clouds. Her feet was in the ground. She wasnt swept off by the intense emotions. She looked deep into his eyes, in a state of trance. Plain it was. There wasnt that shine in his eyes. The silence felt threatening. It didnt speak anything unlike rest of the days.

She pushed him off.. His hands slowly unclutched from hers.. The comfort they had while being together was far gone. They couldnt stand the sight of each other. Not a drop of tear fell from their eyes.

Title Credits : @SunSandRain

10 Shared Thoughts:

Chocolate Lover said...

Awww. This is really sweet. (:

Anonymous said...

enthada idu???

The Pink Orchid said...

I felt every word!! Touched sad and in total awe of your writing skills monu.

..Rugma.. said...

shravan... 'falling out of love', isn't that what actually happened? you fall in love without your head knowing and you fall out of love without your heart knowing... It is the truth... :(
Take care buddy!

Shravan RN said...

Pain is Sweet Inddedwhen time has passed by, and all you have, left out, are the memories, Shri :)

Shravan RN said...

Sis, you and i know who has the writing skills, all i do is to pour out my hear, every time, but i am happy that you said it. and i knew, you would understand more, of all the people who read.

Shravan RN said...

Rugma, Good to see you back here, and thanks for comment, rightly said, about falling it and out of love, this, is a work of fiction with someone else' reality :)
Thanks for coming by and making you say :)

Shravan RN said...

@Anonymous :)

Girl on the Train said...

Ur words drew picture in my heart!!
Can I say U 'Beautiful'?no,I can't because it pains!

Shravan RN said...

Neethu, tell you what? that is one of the most inspiring comment i ever got. true it pains !

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