10

Hurt

As I walk out of your life
knowing that i can never own
and i will owe it all to you
for breaking your heart and
never, trying to mend it again.
For toying with your emotions
like a kid with his doll
For giving you time, hope, and
painting your dreams in rainbow shades
and then leaving you to be
on your own for ling

The hurt you would feel now,
is much lesser than the hurt,
I could give you later

Take my heart and walk
gift me that smile of yours
and i would cherish it forever
and forever is till i die

10 Shared Thoughts:

Leo said...

Entammo. Best verse for walking away n telling ur heart before. We do have to do it sometimes for the best relations. Well writ.

sawan said...

for wut ever reason, i loved it!!! the best iv read of you.

tc.

Chocolate Lover said...

It's beautiful :) <3

Nethra A said...

We always feel sorry for one whom we leave behind, don't we? And we are left behind, we never understand we would have done the same. Anyway, I know it hurts very much. I have been there, gone through it. :(

The Pink Orchid said...

I feel love, sacrifice, care and a million other emotions. Just the way I like it..

Shravan RN said...

@Leo
feels good to read your comment Vinay. and rightly said, sometimes, we need to give up to get back better.

Shravan RN said...

@Sawan
everytime you post such a comment in my blog, it makes me feel and want to write more, and search for inspiration. thank you for reading, and being a source of positives always.

Shravan RN said...

@Shriti
i am glad you found it beautiful than painful choco :)

Shravan RN said...

@Nethra
so much said in less words, i feel, You understood, what i ever wanted to say with this :)

Shravan RN said...

@Kajal
when it comes to feelings and emotions that are unsaid, who else can decode them better than the pink orchid for you give life to such things through your words, through your writings. <3

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