10

His Life

she couldnt stop the tears rolling down her eyes.
he couldnt find a way also.
She hugged him tight for one last time, he was lost.
finally he whispered in her ears,
every single drop of tear that falls down from your eyes will take away one day from my life.
she cried even more.

10 Shared Thoughts:

DuDo said...

Beautifully penned down... Really painful thoughts

et said...

Concise yet intense! And undeniably honest.
Nicely written :)

I wonder if the ending can be seen as partly satirical..?

PS: Wonderful template :P

Shomoita said...

Fingers crossed till July.

Rakesh Vanamali said...

brilliant lines, but one hopes that life at that end is well.......

Shravan RN said...

@Dudo
yep, really painful that it takes life out of life :)

Shravan RN said...

@et
at times, being honest is the best thing to do, and yes, you really did get the idea behind the last line.

and the template credits goes to an awesome friend of mine :) his name is Rahul Anand :)

Shravan RN said...

@shomoita
may be he doesnt deserve it :)

Shravan RN said...

@Rakesh vanamali
much appreciated comment bro. such an inspiration to come back and pen down more.. all is well at the other end :)

DuDo said...

@Shravan May b she doesn't deserve him??? What say it can always be other way round.

Shravan RN said...

@Dudo
may be, if they both are together, end up being together, the purity wont stay.. may be that :)

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