Get out of here. You are no more my son..
Please daddy.. don’t leave me alone ..
Daddy its cold, its dark..
Daddy, am afraid..
Get lost you thief..
Don’t ever come back to my house.. you aren’t my blood..
A minute later,

There he lay, a metal piece breaking apart his heart.

All he did was to take one bread from the table when his drunkard dad was away.

9 Shared Thoughts:

Mind Writer! said...

Was that a suicide or his dad killed him?

Very touchy! The boy should've hurt his dad somehow, rather than killing himself, if it was a suicide! :-|

DuDo said...

well i don't appreciate suicides! or even having a thought about it... good story btw, its reality

Shravan RN said...

what do you think? murder? yes it is :)

Shravan RN said...

me too, these days.. there is a lot to live and see.. and thanks :)

Anonymous said...

I prefer to believe that it's a murder!!!!!!
A murder is much interesting than a suicide..
A lighter way to think :)

Chocolate Lover said...

it scared me! O_O <3

Shravan RN said...

i tried to make it sound like a murder, but all it depends on how you read it, how to perceive it :)

Shravan RN said...

little angel, dont be :) <3

Jinju said...

good one... nd definitely his dad killed him in drunken rage...

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