many miles to go before the hault,
moving past the isolated lanes,
and through the crowded stations,
the journey goes on, and on !

often so filled with no space,
like my mind thats lost in thoughts,
and often so abandoned, isolated,
like me, longing for all your love !

who knows when its time,
for you to come, or may be not.
like the waves i count in despiar,
the wait for you, goes on, and on !

Image : Chirakkal Raliway Station on a Sunday Evening.

15 Shared Thoughts:

V Rakesh said...

Whoaaa! This is straight outta the heart!

And a brilliant picture to go along with it! Somehow trains have held immense significance in my life, and continue to do so ;)

sawan said...

aha!! feb in near and luv is in the air!! :P

KParthasarathi said...

Nice one.Does the long and empty street signify the undue wait?
You hv captured the scene so well

sakhii•• said...

wow...superb!!...gr8!!....specially d second stanza!!

Chocolate Lover said...

woooow! Awesome shravan
loved it! ^_^

take care.

Shravan RN said...

@ V Rakesh
yup, straight out of my heart :-) and the picture just came good :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Sawan
hmm :-) its in the air always :-) i just caught a handful this time :)

Shravan RN said...

@ K P Sir
may be the platform signifies the undue wait :-) and thanks for liking the picture :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Sakhi
thank you sakhi :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Shriti
:) thanks.. and thanks for the tweet :-)

SindhuBhairavi said...

nannayittundu.. !

SindhuBhairavi said...

hey that pic is also nice.. did u take it?

Shravan RN said...

@ SB
thank you ji, and yup, that pic is from my mob :)

Sneha said...

Loved the pic and the poem too.

very well written.:)

Shravan RN said...

@ Sneha
:) thanks.. this piece made me feel like, omg ! am back lol :)

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