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Her Life

 he left home smashing the door behind at her towards his new found love.
the next morning, the maid found her dead body along with a note reading, sorry my child i had to abort you for him, and now, look, he aborted me for her, and here, i come to you, so called life !!

11 Shared Thoughts:

SindhuBhairavi said...

that was a very good attempt! :) just in those few lines u could bring pain in the readers heart.. it did!

Shravan RN said...

@ SB
thank you sb :) and am glad to know that few lines could serve the purpose :)

Chocolate Lover said...

wooow!
that's really nice :)
agreed with sindhu Bhairavi

Shravan RN said...

@ Shriti
:) thangyu thangyu :)

Mind Writer! said...

Hmm... good one, a very good one...

sakhii•• said...

somehow cute;)

DuDo said...

gr8 plot bro!!! go ahd...

Shravan RN said...

@ Lopa Sakhi and Zapper86
:-) thanks and thanks :-)

Sneha said...

Its a very good attempt.

agreed to Sindu.

Really very very touching.

NEEYA ............ said...

heart-touching language!

Shravan RN said...

@ Sneha and Neeya
thank you both :)

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