let me just wander in thoughts
wake me up not to reality
let me not face the cruel world
better is the land in my dreams

do not bother showing me who you are
let me just think, you are for real
and so be your love care and everything
let me sleep dreaming and wake me up not.

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Sorcerer said...

hm.short and simple your poems are


loved readin your works

Chocolate Lover said...

haha! just now I woke up!
btw nice post :)
short and sweet

Chocolate Lover said...

and yeah blog template is looking awesome :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Sorcerer
:) and thats all i know to do :) thanks mate !

Shravan RN said...

@ Shriti
lol :) and thanks.. and template.. thank you..

SindhuBhairavi said...

hmm .. now that was something really goood !!! :) loved it.. evideyo oru omanatham undu :) and what the poem says is so true.. caz i have the same to say .. "better is the land in my dreams.."

the 5th line was really sweet! :)

Shravan RN said...

@ SB
hey thank you dear :) and the 5th line :D it just came by :) glad you're liking the way i pen these days !

Amritbir Kaur said...

Sleep is a nice way of enjoying our dreams. But we are desparate when they are broken when we wake up.
Our former President Dr. Abdul Kalam has a different viewpoint about dreams that I liked very much. He says, "Dreams are not what you have when you sleep, dreams are those that don't let you sleep."
Indeed, our life revolves around our dreams always and we are unable to detach ourselves from them.
Thanks for sharing an inspiring post.

Shravan RN said...

@ Amritbir Kaur
:) broken dreams do make us feel desperate and APJ's, yup i know :D and when reality stings, its better to live in dreams :) thank you for the detailed comment maa'm. new year greetings !

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