Beautiful Black

as your lip seals mine and
as you whisper to my ears
the wise words of prayers,
my soul cleaves my body
and there, they dance
my soul, twinned to yours !

death they call you by name,
but for me, you are the savior
lead me to the paths of karma
away from this carnal desires
to the next incarnated life
where life is to get stained again.

PS : read Sindhu Bhairavi's Beautiful Black ! Original idea for this post is from that wonderful piece of written work !

PPS : title shamelessly copied from the real author !

PPPS : don't forget to check the previous update.. am in a good mood to go on penning down :)

6 Shared Thoughts:

SindhuBhairavi said...

:) loved it! :) i feel beautiful black is complete only now.. :) thanks for completing it..

life is to get stained again.. well said.. !!

thanks for the good words said about beautiful black in ur blog.. :)

keep writing..

Sneha said...


It is believed that death releases one from the agony of present existence only to take one back into the agony of next one. And that has led wise people to strive for salvation of the soul.

Chocolate Lover said...

wow! awesome shravan
gr8 job!
good to see u in good mood :)

Shravan RN said...

@ SB
hehe.. was in a good mood to :) and thanks :) new year greetings

@ Sneha
:) thank you..new year greetings

@ Shriti
:) thank you girl.. and good mood :D am always in these days :)new year greetings :)

Amritbir Kaur said...

A new way of looking at death...
Death is indeed, an escape from the sinful desires we indulge in while being on this Earth. Very well said!
I went through your source of inspiration too.

Shravan RN said...

@ Amritbir Kaur
:) yup, death is an escape:) and thank you for the appreciation.

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