A Small Difference

ok. ok.. i have read enough of 55fs, there are these masters of the art.. before its too late, taking my time out to try the same.. in the end, i promise to make you laugh.. either for this poor attempt, or for what i wrote !

he walked towards his dad who had his eyes fixed to the laptop screen slowly. reaching closer, he held out the paper he had to his dad.
"dad, remember how many times you punished me for that same half mark?"
"earlier i missed just a half mark, now i just scored a half !"

21 Shared Thoughts:

KParthasarathi said...


Hasna Fathima said...

loved this for its short yet 'wow'

(you must try writing poetry out of compulsion and great demand from readers!)

Chocolate Lover said...

lol nice one :))

Manivannan Sadasivam said...

he he :-)

Good one!

Manivannan Sadasivam said...

he he :-)

Good one!

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Wow..now thats a attempt i say :)

Is it non fiction? it seems to be...:P

divsi said...

hehe..nice one:)
gud goin..try another one...n yeah nice blog name too:)
reminds me of umbrige:))))

Shravan RN said...

@ KP Sir

Shravan RN said...

@ Hasna
not "wow" you should really starting reading others :P
and poetry.. lol.. those stuffs just come by.. you know right? chechi? i dont write for the sake of it. but yup, i will try !

Shravan RN said...

@ Shriti

Shravan RN said...

@ Mani
:) thanks mate

Shravan RN said...

@ Mahesh
this time around, it is purely fictional, 3 years back, and it was non fictional :P

Shravan RN said...

@ Divsi
hi hey.. good to see you here and thanks.. and thanks for liking the name.. who is umbrige? :P

learn quran said...

Nice post!

Shravan RN said...

@ Learn Quran
:) thank you :)

SindhuBhairavi said...

:) i love it when u try to make us laugh.. that was a good one. we all love to laugh.. so do write more..

have a nice time..

Nivedita said...

i love it when people write whatever comes on their mind. i like your posts for being that way. its very un-fake.

hbsp said...

fair enough i would say :P

Shravan RN said...

@ SB
thanks dear :) so how are you? and hows diya?

@ Nivedita
yup same here and well, i write what i feel like writing, true from my heart :))

thanks :) from wordpress right?

divsi said...

umbridge is... Err u haven't read harry potter:( shes the horrid minister of magic witch who uses quills to ooze out her victims blood:p

priya said...

really short bt a nice one
i cn totally relate to this one

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