The birds in the yard,
the dreaming cattle,
dancing tulips,
murmuring bees,
everything except me smells life..

I can't remember my past,
neither my eyes see the day next,
nor I live every moment..

All I know,
its moments..
tiny moments..

Its November,
Its full of green in my eyes..
Its November my dear friends,
yet another sweet time of the year..

Hold my hands,
as we walk on these sea shore,
let me not wander for diamonds..

I love sand grains..
because, I remember you..
every time they escape from my hands..

how many times I wanted to say,
words deep from my heart,
I thought, 'words doesn't matter'

I let open the cage ,
let the words fly,
let them dance in the air,
let them cry in front of you,
and let me not be shy..

Let me embrace you,
with my words,
& let me say,'I love you'
because its November,
yet another sweet time of the year.

Special Note to Shravan: Dear Shravan, you have always been an encouraging man and I know that you know how great it is to be so.More and more names are being added into the list of people who are gonna smile when they remember you..
Thank you so much..take care.

16 Shared Thoughts:

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

It reminds me of November rain by Guns N' Roses.
This attempt looks good to me and gives a new face to the poem in many ways :)

Very nice attempt SP.


Shravan RN said...

@ Hasna Chechi :)
that made me go aww.. romantic :) :P and thank you dear :)

divsi said...

@ hasna: beautifully melodious..
:) it had a rhythm in it wich u kept alive all thruout..
n i liked it for another reason too..november is my fav month too:))

@ shravan: chechi means sister na?

SindhuBhairavi said...

hasna.. how many times shall i say.. that ur poems are addictive.. it touches the heart so much that i feel it bleeds..

shravan.. thanks a million for letting us have a beautiful poem in this blog.. and what hasna has written about u below the poem is 101 % true..

take care both of you..

God bless...

Chocolate Lover said...

really sweet hasna.. :)
loved it

Hasna Fathima said...

Hi Mahesh,
I know November rain lyrics.My version of November is too small to be compared with November rain.:-)
Thank you so much for your encouragement..

Hasna Fathima said...

Hi Divsi..
Thanks for the kind words.
Happy to know that you love November.
take care..

Hasna Fathima said...

Dear Sindhu Chechi,
I let open my words
Let me not be shy,
But if are reading this I will be shy..
Take care a lot.

Hasna Fathima said...

Hi Dear Choco Girl..
Thanks dear,hope u r fine..take care.

Hasna Fathima said...

What should I write back to you? Its your blog!!
Thanks a lot.
It makes me feel happy to see my poem published in your blog and the responses are so lovely...

Manivannan Sadasivam said...


What soulful lines! There is so much beauty and innocence in them....Wonderful!

It makes my heart sing...Loved it very much Hasna :-)

Take care, and enjoy November :D

Jaunty anima said...

lovellyy poem..I must say!!
n a nice blog there!!

Chocolate Lover said...

hey shravan..
how r u?
just wanted to tell you that you won an award :)

Shravan RN said...

@Jaunty anima
credit of poem and appreciation goes to Hasna chechi, and thanks for the comment on blog !

Shravan RN said...

@Chocolate Lover
am good dear.. but a lil busy.. and wow thanks :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Divsi
yup, chechi means sister, elder sister :)

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