Love | പ്രണയം

വിരിയാറായ പൂമൊട്ടും,
വാടിവീണ പൂവും,
ഒരു പുഞ്ചിരിയും,
ഒരു തുള്ളി കണ്ണുനീരും,
എന്റെ പ്രണയത്തിന്റെ ഒടുക്കവും,
ഓർമകളുടെ ജനനവും..

a bud to bloom,
a flower to fall,
a smile on lips,
a drop of tear,
the end of my love,
the birth of memories...

P S : its time for me to start using spects again. it felt good, not writing the exam. been to the eye specialist this morning.
P P S : attempting to write short stories, and so, you might want to have a look at the previous post.

16 Shared Thoughts:

KParthasarathi said...

Nice one.Looking forward eagerly to your short stories
Best wishes

..Rugma.. said...

i thnk ur attmpt wil lead u 2 success....:)
nice lines....:)
take care...

Mind Writer! said...

Nice to know you're half blind like me...lol... What's your power?

Hasna Fathima said...

this time i go with the malayalam verses...good work

Shravan RN said...

@ K P Sir,
thank you sir, and well, not in the near future it seems.. :(

Shravan RN said...

@ Rugma
i too hope so.. but yeah, its gonna be delayed.. :(

Shravan RN said...

@ Lopa
well am not blind, not even half.. its coz of the axis and stuff that am said to use the spects.. -0.25 90 and 60 degree axis on left and right.. thats all :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Hasna
and well, u said it.. i wanted to write only the malayalam lines.. and english is for those people, who might just want to know what its all about.. or look at it.. baee.. word by word.. aint good :)

Mind Writer! said...

Damn! That's an insult to the specs...lol... You're lucky. I'm blind! :D

anupama said...

Dear Shravan,
good morning!
A bud to bloom-----it means hope
A smile on lips----again a beautiful feeling that inspires.
how do they represnt the end of love?:)
if it has to end at the right time,let it pass on........never stop.another bud blooms with a deep touch.:)[experience is the best teacher....]throw the memories too to the dustbin.....outgrow the past].this is not the end of life.on the way someone better waits eager to shower love;destined only for u.
the beginning of another love......
the world is not that bad....so many buds to bloom spreading fragrance of love......
specs, not an happening these days;be grateful to God-nothing wrong with your vision-so,see the best of everyone n everything in a new angle..........study hard,hardly months left for the final hit.[i assure,no qts on past n present love].:)
have a great day..........

Amal Bose said...

loved it..
liked the malayalam ones better :)
looking forward for ur short stories..

Shravan RN said...

@ Lopa
lol dear sissie :) and well, as seen in the photo, that spects does add to your beauty :P

Shravan RN said...

@ Anupama
haha, i loved that comment anupama..

Shravan RN said...

@ Amal
:) give me my time amal :)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Thats a sweet write up..

first line is something that comes first and second line is soemthing that comes later as a pain.

You followed it every 2 lines..thats good shravan :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Mahesh
exactly :) and thank you for the comment mate.. cheers :)

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