of all the love, lust and passion,
drained my heart is now,
as you walked away from me,
to the open hands of your new found love.


in your eyes, i see the passion
in your words, i find the love
resting in your arms,
i know what falling in love means.


in your eyes, i see the plague
of my questions of your past
but for once, listen to my heart's say
“I want to do with you what spring does with cherry trees…. ”

the last line by Pablo Neruda, “Every Day You Play”, from Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair(1924)

P S : Creating my own ways in writing.. broken heart and new found love..

PPS : Thanks to my Virtual Twin Jinju for telling me about Pablo's Lines..

PPPS : I am bored.

4 Shared Thoughts:

anupama said...

Dear Shravan,

his heart is never drained;
he is full of life,
let anyone walks away from life,
so young,so gentle,so emotional,
the best has yet to come,
he should be patient enough,
the life is so beautiful,
the flowers are still blooming,
he is in high spirits,
waiting for the spring,
not shedding tears on the past,
an untouched pure bud wants to bloom,
just a feather touch from him,
it waits for with hopes n dreams,
reach out young man,a spring waits for u!:)

better hands will be stretched out,
to make you feel what is real love.
she stopped seeing the passion n love in him,
so let her move on,her dreams are not the same.


he reached her just by luck n chance,
she fitted rightly in to the dream girl picture,
right now he won't like to listen,
living in present feeling the new love.
leave him alone,he wants to live,
pray she will be atleast with him.

in this world of creativity,u just can't afford to get bored,shravan!
turn to nature,the plants n birds,
the waves of payyambalam beach,
enjoy the festival n be happy;
let the spring be in your feet,
let the music be in your heart,
let your legs shake to the tune,
and this wonderful morning,
i wish you all the very best.:)

Shravan RN said...

@ Anupama
eid mubarak..
and wow.. nice lines there.. and i just liked it loved it and it did lift my spirits for the day :)

Jinju said...

Wow!!! great poem da!!! keep it up!

Shravan RN said...

@ Jinju

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