Guiding Light

Cold, dark and isolated
the way forward
hardly could i see
a step ahead
yet my desire to continue
draws me to that own path
i walk, i stumble
i fall, but i never quit
it pains, it bleeds,
i struggle, yet i go on
nothings stops,me from the move
all i have, in me, to hold,
the faith in Him, unseen and
the hopes in me, unburned,
and many a dreams to fulfil
I walk, guided by the light you show,
my inner self.

Hasna, this is for you.. Remember you asked me to write on anything other than Death, Love, Loss, Pain.

9 Shared Thoughts:

anupama said...

dear shravan,
at last,mentioning about HIM,
really happy to know,
the mind is determined,
ready to walk that thorny path,
HE n only HE will be with us,
till the last breath in this earth,
and today,on an auspicious day,
Naga Panchami puja is going on,
i feel happy for you,
you will reach the destination!
blessed you are,just keep in mind;
and start counthing the blessings,
it helps you smile n cause a smile!

enjoyed the positive lines nwishing you a great day ahead........

zenana said...

though its not about death n such stuffs :):),I stii feel the pain in those lines....new thoughts which are build up on the same emotion,aha :):)??

sakhii•• said...

wow....dis is a wonderful poem!!

KParthasarathi said...

I liked this poem very much.It is short and sweet.Unalterable faith in Him will take you to your desired destination.

Shravan RN said...

@ Anupama
He may not be the He you thinks :D am referring to that one supernatural soul who is above all of us :D and I am glad that you liked the positive lines from me :D

Shravan RN said...

@ Zenana
And now, you made a real good read :D and there it is, the pain it the lines.. and you are right.. for one with pessimistic views, its never easy to do a real positive thoughts.. but for the pessimist with optimistic views, it can be mixed it up well and neat :D

Shravan RN said...

@ Blue-eyed soul
Hey good to see you here.. and thanks.. at 13, you are doing a wonderful job.

Shravan RN said...

@ K P sir
:) I loved it sir, and I hope I reach my destination :D and i loved that 6 fingers story by you :D :)

anupama said...

dear shravan,
HE is the HE whom you thought.we call HIM by different names.KANNAN,SHIVA,GANESH,DEVI,ALLAH,JESUS and some call HIM by Supernatural Soul. choice is individual.
anupama stands for positive thoughts.
happy writing....

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