There will be a day
When I shall sleep
With no dreams
No nightmares
And no fear of failure
Nor will I triumph
On my victories
I will sleep
with all peace,
And thus,
Eternal my soul would turn.

24 Shared Thoughts:

Sneha said...


Amal Bose said...

that was really good
i also wish for such a day in my life..

Hasna Fathima said...

Hmmm..good,I understood..
what if someone wake you up?? :-)

KParthasarathi said...

why again this melancholy?
Why talk of eternal peace when you have miles to go,young man

V Rakesh said...


lakshmi said...

nice one Shravan
somehow that is what each of us want and that is what each of us would surely get.......but long way to go ...........

cheer up

Mahesh Sindbandge said...


I just hope everyopne dies with the same thoughts.....which as a matter of fact, next to impossible in reality.

Good one..


Jinju said...

Nice poem shravee... I like the turn of the verse... and the theme too

DUBU said...

i wish the same! :) hiya, again after a long time! m sorry for my long absences between posts and i always come with a promise to be regular... life's been too good to me these days and i'm enjoying it...

thanks for mentioning me in the post that marked your 555th day and big congrats! you're going great. :) BTW, i'm a She. :) i'm the 'DU' of the 'DUBU'. the 'BU' of 'DUBU' is my better half and he owns our cookery blog. :) hope i haven't confused you.. haha! :)

Bindhu Unny said...

yes, sleep like a baby :-)

Shravan RN said...

@ Sneha
second time i hear the word here :D

Shravan RN said...

@ Amal
good to see you here mate.. hows tvm? and yeah, and everyone will have such a day.

Shravan RN said...

@ Hazna
that day,
i will sleep
with my doors open
and then doors of my heart
locked, and not even a call
will then let me live :)

Shravan RN said...

@ KP Sir
everytime i restart poetry, its all melancholy :) and thats all sir !

Shravan RN said...

@ Rakesh bhai
:) cheers

Shravan RN said...

@ Lakshmi akka
true akka, very true, cheers !

Shravan RN said...

@ Mahesh
:) wazzup mate?

Shravan RN said...

@ Jinju
just smiles for u dear ;)

Shravan RN said...

@ Dubu
i knew it :) and yeah, promises are often meant to break :D happy breaking them.. ehehe :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Bindhu Unny
i just wish to be like a kid, the innocent smile, the calm eyes, they are awesome blessed ones :)

Miss Sunshine said...

sooooooo deep :D it WAS so thoughtful :D :P

Shravan RN said...

@ Miss Sunshine
:) yeah i know :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Yes, at times we are so tired that we feel like sleeping forever.

Nice poem, Shravan :)

Shravan RN said...

@ Ayesha

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